Poor little rat, caught literally in the middle. All he wanted was a bit of work to feed his family.
This page shows something still prevalent today in the fandom, alas: a lack of clear dialogue flow. The eye is not supposed to jump across the page to follow conversations, or go left, right then centre – here we’re supposed to go with whatever text box starts lower along the page.
Poor little rat, caught literally in the middle. All he wanted was a bit of work to feed his family.
This page shows something still prevalent today in the fandom, alas: a lack of clear dialogue flow. The eye is not supposed to jump across the page to follow conversations, or go left, right then centre – here we’re supposed to go with whatever text box starts lower along the page.